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Beware the Jabberwock, Alice
The jaws that bite, the claws that catch
Beware the infernal breath, and malice
The frumious Bandersnatch!

The Vorpal Blade her hand has borne
Long time the manxome foe she sought
So there she stood by side of gryphon
And Rage came in thought.

The Jabberwock, with eye aflame
Came whiffing through Queensland
Screeching murder as he came
The Vorpal blade was quick to rend

she left it dead, on the ground, forlorn
The Blade trembles, still sanguine.
Her minions pave the way to the throne
All I am is thirst for the queen.

Where is that wretched creature?

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Written By Ido Freedman
Directed by me

we re-wrote the original poem (:

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RD-Wolf's avatar
Very nice, creative re-write indeed!
The metre is slightly off though, which makes it a bit too clear it's an alteration. The wording is nice, nevertheless!